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How to write a résumé, Part 1: Types of résumés

John Roach

Your résumé is one of the most important documents you will write.  It is a sales brochure about you – your experience, your strengths, and your life.

It’s also one of the hardest things you will write.  When you send your résumé to a potential employer, you don’t just have to prove that you’re worth an interview; you have to prove that you’re more worthy of an interview than the other hundreds of people that sent in their résumé.

An effective résumé needs to be strongly written. You’ve got about 5 seconds to grab that employer’s attention and keep them reading until the end; otherwise, your résumé will end up in the trash, with your chances of landing that dream job right along with it.

Types of résumés

There are two main types of résumés: chronological and functional. Chronological highlights what you’ve done, while functional highlights what you can do.

Chronological

These are organized by job titles, which the most recent position listed first.  Employers tend to prefer these, as they are easy to skim and get an idea of the person behind the paper.

What to write:

  • Name and contact info
  • Objective: A concise statement about the job you want.
  • Summary: 2-4 bullet points with the most important aspects about yourself or your experience that help you reach your objective. For example: job experience, personality traits, community service, skills and strengths. Prioritize bullets by relevance.
  • Professional Experience: Organized by job title, beginning with the most recent. List the job title, the company, the city and state, and the dates you held the position. Follow with 2-3 bullet points highlighting your accomplishments at that position.  Follow this same format for all positions. If you spend long periods of time at one position with multiple titles, combine your tenure into one entry.
  • Education: Begin with the highest degree first. List the degree and major, the school, and the dates you attended. Mention any clubs, activities or awards.
  • Optional: Community Service; and Skills, if not mentioned in job position details.

Functional

This kind of résumé is organized into sections rather than by position, highlighting skills and accomplishments. It is ideal for new graduates, those who lack a lot of experience, and job-hoppers, or those making a career change.

Some employers dislike functional résumés if it is difficult to match the skills mentioned with the positions held. Avoid confusion by mentioning the company or position in each bullet point.

What to write:

  • Name and contact info
  • Objective: A concise statement about the job you want
  • Highlight of Qualifications (same as the Summary in the chronological résumé)
  • Professional Accomplishments, organized by Key Skills: This is the big difference between functional and chronological résumés. Pick out 2 or 3 key skills that you possess that are relevant to the objective and the job you are applying for. For example, an applicant for a management position might pick “Management” and “Development” for his skills. An applicant for a design job might choose “Graphic Design” and “Photography.” Write 2 or more bullet statements on where you used this skill – it can be a job, or community service or activity, or someplace else that it came in handy. Prioritize the bullets with the most relevant first. As with the chronological résumé, you will mention how it positively affected the company, your boss, your customers, and your coworkers. Quantify results when appropriate. Also include awards or other recognition you received.
  • Work History: Here is where you will list all the positions you’ve held, beginning with the most recent first. You don’t have to go into any detail about them. Basically, just list the position title, the company, the city and state, and the dates. No other information is required, unless something really needs explaining, such as a gap in work history.
  • Education (same as chronological)
  • Optional (same as chronological)

Looking forward

Next time, we’ll dicuss some pointers for polishing your résumé into an effective sales document.  While many people dash off a résumé and send it out, we’ll give you some tips for turning your résumé into a shining reflection of your skills and potential.
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Colon: The unfortunately named mark

John Roach

The colon is one of the most powerful punctuation marks we have.  It signifies that what comes after is what you’ve been waiting for. It is the harbinger of the payload, a sign that says “information here” in big red letters.

It also shares a name with a body part that one doesn’t discuss in polite company.

Where to use a colon

Colons are used when two parts of a sentence are dependent upon each other, but not that dependent.

The most common place to put a colon is just before a list.

He ate three things: chicken, eggs, and brains.

You do not use a colon if the list is introduced by a verb or preposition.

He ate chicken, eggs, and brains.

A colon is used with quotations if the quote is several sentences long and will stay in the paragraph, or just for dramatic effect.

He said just one thing about his diet: “It’s not like I’m eating people brains.”

You can also use a colon instead of “namely,” “e.g.,” or “such as.”

He only ate brains from livestock: cows, sheep, and pigs.

Set off two fully independent clauses with a comma, not a colon.

He ate brains, but he didn’t eat liver.

Capitalization and the colon

Capitalize the word after the colon only if it is a proper noun or begins a complete sentence.

Three of us tried his stew: John and his sisters.

Their reactions were mixed: chiefly disgust, but some morbid curiosity.

John had only this to say: “That wasn’t albatross I ate on the boat.”

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That which doesn’t restrict you makes you non-essential

John Roach

“That” or “which” — the eternal question. Which of these two words should you use to start a clause?

The answer depends on how important what you’re writing is. If the clause is important to the meaning, you use “that”; if it can be omitted without changing the meaning, you use “which.”

Essential clauses take “that”

Essential clauses are just that: they are essential to the meaning of the sentence. When introducing such a clause, you use “that.”

The car that cut me off was a blue Honda.  

Taking the clause out leaves us with a meaningless sentence.

The car was a blue Honda.

Nonessential clauses take “which”

If the clauses can be left out without any loss in meaning, you use “which” and set it off with commas.

The blue Honda, which had a vanity plate, was going about 90 mph.

Dropping the clause leaves us with the same meaning.

The blue Honda was going about 90 mph.

Sure, we miss out on the vanity plate, but we get all the important stuff.

What the experts say about “that” and “which”

The usual suspects agree with me almost entirely. AP style is identical to the rules set out above. Chicago Style agrees with the rules, but points out that they refer only to American English.  Fowler also agrees but wimps out, saying that not everyone follows the rules.  That being said, if you’re well-known enough to make it into Fowler’s, you’ve probably earned the right to break a few rules.

A final exception

It most be noted that there is one big exception: “That” cannot be used with a preposition.  If a preposition is called for, use “which,” regardless of how essential the clause is.

The blue Honda of which we speak is being pulled over right now.

The living room in which we are sitting is on fire.

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Are your headlines costing you readers?

John Roach

Headlines are the most important thing you’ll ever write. No matter how well-written your article is, it will be ignored if your headline isn’t compelling.

Make no mistake: Good headlines are hard to write. You’ve got about 2 seconds and 10 words at most to convince the potential reader to trust you with their time. Clearly, your pitch must be strong.

Let us consider an article about the recent Google Chrome EULA fiasco. A quick recap for those of you who aren’t familiar with the situation: Google’s new web browser, Chrome, shipped with a EULA that said, essentially, that by using their browser, you are giving Google the right to republish any content made with it as they see fit. Google later retracted the EULA retroactively, saying it was a mistake. We’ll ignore the last part of the story for the purpose of these exercises.

So, you’ve written an insightful, well-researched, and potentially life-changing article on the dangers of using Chrome and, with society’s best interests at heart, want to spread the word far and wide to protect them from the dangers of rights-stealing contracts. So what is your headline? What do you write to get people’s attention and drive them to your article?

The first thing you do is get the relevant keywords. I use the Google Adwords keyword tool, which has the advantages of being cheap and easy.  Of course, the savvy web writer has already consulted a keyword research tool when writing the article itself, but it never hurts to be sure.

The keywords you choose should be the first word in your headline or as close to it as you can manage.  Don’t be concerned about them sounding contrived — keywords represent what people are actually searching for. By using keywords, you’re doing the reader a favor by making relevant content easy to find.

Now let’s look at a few approaches to writing a compelling headline. None of these are the best approach: it depends on the tone of your site and the expectations of your reader.

The no-nonsense approach.

Chrome’s software license agreement gives Google republishing rights

This approach has the advantage of getting the straight facts, and keywords, across in a clear-cut manner. It has the disadvantage of being boring. Unless you have a very large, loyal audience who would read the phone book if you published it, consider this approach as little more than a starting point.

The quote approach

Chrome’s license “appalling”

This one’s nice. It allows you to say something in a news headline that you wouldn’t ordinarily get away with. Of course, if it’s an opinion piece, you wouldn’t need the quote marks.

Just to be clear, if you put a word in quotation marks in your headline, it had very well better appear in quotes in your article.

The Getting-a-rise approach

Chrome’s license is the end of the internet

Here we’ve stepped away from respectable journalistic ideals and into the realm of tabloids. Compare the number of people who read tabloids to how many read your site before you look down your nose at this one.

The question approach

How does Chrome’s license affect you?

Funny thing about question marks in headlines: They are much less respected than they are effective.  Asking a question pulls in readers because they want to know the answer, so long as the question is relevant to them.

The funny approach

Chrome’s license is Google’s Plan 9

The intentionally unfunny example above highlights the difficulty of writing a funny headline: Your friends think you’re funny. Your mom does. Anonymous strangers looking down a list of search results probably don’t.

By all means, use humor in your writing. But don’t count on everyone getting your joke, and don’t bet your traffic on them getting it, thinking it’s funny, and thinking it’s funny enough to read what else you have to say.

The number approach

5 ways Chrome’s license affects you

A number may very well be the most effective way to start a headline. Take a look at Digg’s front page, for example, and see how many numbers you see. Lists are easy to read and digest. They’re also an easy way to drive traffic.

The sex approach

Naked women explain Chrome’s license

No, you probably can’t get away with this one. I wanted to add it, however, to drive home the importance of write a compelling headline. Ask yourself this before hitting “publish”: With the plethora of pornography available on the internet, am I writing something that will distract my readers from their baser needs?

If you should decide to start a site in which naked women explain the news, understand this: You will be shameless, you will be exploitive, and you will be rich. Sad, but true.

Okay, I’ve given 6 approaches, some of which will actually work and some that are either too conservative or too risqué. How about you? If you’ve got an effective technique, leave your headline in the comments and explain why it works.

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Semicolon: The forgotten mark

John Roach

If you like rooting for the underdog, you’re going to love the semicolon. Although the en dash may be used even less, it’s not out of spite — no one’s ever heard of it. Not so with the semicolon. It is commonly rejected by lesser writers everywhere. Once you learn and apply the two simple rules for semicolon usage below, you’ll stand head and shoulders above the rest.

  1. Semicolons join two independent clauses.
    • also
    • however
    • otherwise
    • consequently
    • indeed
    • similarly
    • finally
    • likewise
    • then
    • furthermore
    • moreover
    • therefore
    • hence
    • nevertheless
    • thus
    • nonetheless.
  2. If you have two closely related independent clauses, separate them with a semicolon

    To err is human; to forgive, divine.

    He washes the dishes; I do the laundry. 

    If the link between the clauses is not so obvious, you can link the two clauses with a conjunctive adverb. 

    Conjunctive adverbs are words such as however, nonetheless, as a result. They make apparent the logical relationship between the two clauses. Here is a non-conclusive list.

     

    He was, in most ways, a model employee; however, his kleptomania cost him many a promotion.

    In the above example, the two independent clauses wouldn’t work without the semicolon and conjunction. 
      

    The main thing to remember is to use the semicolon rather than a comma. Using a comma where a semicolon is more appropriate creates a comma splice; if that happens, copious amounts of red ink will be spilled.

  3. Semicolons act as dividers in complex lists
  4. I’d like to thank my dog, my wife, Jennifer, my cat, and Randy Newman. 

    Pop quiz: How many people are being thanked in the sentence above, 4 or 5? 

    The answer is, we don’t know. The speaker’s wife may be Jennifer, his cat may be Jennifer, or Jennifer may be someone else entirely. Luckily, we have a solution to our ambiguity problem.

    I’d like to thank my dog; my wife, Jennifer; my cat; and Randy Newman.

    Now we know for sure that the speaker’s wife is named Jennifer.

    Use a semicolon in a list when one of the items requires a comma itself. Think of the semicolon as comma’s back-up: It jumps in when the comma can’t handle the job alone.

Well, there you have it: Two simple rules for impeccable semicolon usage. Follow them and you’ll stand out as a writer, a lover, and a human being.

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16 words and phrases to omit for more concise writing

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  1. That
    If the sentence reads okay without it, omit it.      

    I think that yogurt is delicious.

    I think yogurt is delicious.

  2. There is
  3. Get to the point. A sentence beginning with “there is” is a weak sentence.

    There is only one cup of yogurt left.

    Only one cup of yogurt is left.

  4. Adverbs
  5.  Do you need it to get your point across?

    I am madly in love with yogurt.

    I am in love with yogurt.

  6. Doublets
  7.  Cease and desist? Really?

    I really and truly love that yogurt.

    I really love that yogurt.

    (Ignoring the preceding tip, of course.)

  8. Or not
  9.  I don’t care whether you think you need it — you don’t.

    I don’t know whether or not I love her as much as I love yogurt.

    I don’t know whether I love her as much as I love yogurt.

  10. Kinds of
  11. Don’t artificially limit your writing when it’s already done for you.

    I like some kinds of yogurt.

    I like some yogurt.

  12. For all intents and purposes
  13. For all intents and purposes, yogurt has become my primary food group.

    Yogurt has become my primary food group.

    “All intensive purposes” is right out.

  14.   Generally speaking
  15. This is a classic example of weasel language.

    Generally speaking, spoiled yogurt is not yummy.

    Spoiled yogurt is not yummy.

  16. Phrases that can be turned into single words
  17. Omit needless words.
     

    Yogurt with strawberry chunks in it is my favorite.

    Strawberry yogurt is my favorite.

  18. It is, there are
  19. These and similar phrases only stand in the way of your point.

    It is my wife who picks out the flavors.

    My wife picks out the flavors.

  20. The fact that
  21. These three meaningless words are the quickest way to turn a perfectly active voice to a passive one.

    The fact that I don’t get to pick the yogurt is cause for concern.

    I don’t like not getting to pick the yogurt.

  22. At this point in time
  23. Wow, you’ve managed to cram one word of meaning into five.

    At this point in time, we’re flush with yogurt.

    We’re flush with yogurt now.

  24. With regards to
  25. “Regarding” will fit the bill quite nicely.

    With regards to your yogurt obsession, we need to cut back on your culture intake.

    Regarding your yogurt obsession, we need to cut back on your culture intake.

  26. Has the ability to
  27. “Can.”

    Yogurt has the ability to wreck a marriage.

    Yogurt can wreck a marriage.

  28. It could happen that
  29. “May.”

    It could happen that she leaves me, solely because I love yogurt.

    She may leave me, solely because I love yogurt.

  30. It goes without saying
  31. Well, it should have.

    It goes without saying that you should never love yogurt more than your wife.

    You should never love yogurt more than your wife.

     

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593 words you’re probably misspelling

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  1. absence
  2. abundance
  3. accessible
  4. accidentally
  5. acclaim
  6. accommodate
  7. accomplish
  8. accordion
  9. accumulate
  10. achieve
  11. achievement
  12. acquaintance
  13. acquire
  14. acquitted
  15. across
  16. across
  17. address
  18. advertise
  19. advertisement
  20. advice
  21. advise
  22. affect
  23. aggravate
  24. all right
  25. alleged
  26. amateur
  27. amend
  28. amendment
  29. among
  30. analysis
  31. analyze
  32. annual
  33. apartment
  34. apparatus
  35. apparent
  36. appearance
  37. archaeologist
  38. arctic
  39. argument
  40. ascend
  41. atheist
  42. athlete
  43. athletic
  44. attendance
  45. auxiliary
  46. awful
  47. balance
  48. balloon
  49. barbecue
  50. barbiturate
  51. bargain
  52. basically
  53. becoming
  54. before
  55. beggar
  56. beginning
  57. belief
  58. believe
  59. beneficial
  60. benefit
  61. breathe
  62. bicycle
  63. biscuit
  64. bouillon
  65. boundaries
  66. boundary
  67. brilliant
  68. Britain
  69. broccoli
  70. Buddha
  71. bureau
  72. business
  73. calendar
  74. camaraderie
  75. camouflage
  76. candidate
  77. cantaloupe
  78. careful
  79. category
  80. Caribbean
  81. category
  82. ceiling
  83. cemetery
  84. certain
  85. chagrined
  86. challenge
  87. changeable
  88. changing
  89. characteristic
  90. chief
  91. choose
  92. chose
  93. cigarette
  94. citizen
  95. climbed
  96. cloth
  97. clothes
  98. clothing
  99. collectible
  100. colonel
  101. colossal
  102. column
  103. coming
  104. commission
  105. commitment
  106. committee
  107. comparative
  108. competent
  109. competition
  110. completely
  111. concede
  112. conceivable
  113. conceive
  114. condemn
  115. condescend
  116. conscience
  117. conscientious
  118. conscious
  119. consciousness
  120. consistent
  121. continuous
  122. controlled
  123. controversial
  124. controversy
  125. convenience
  126. convenient
  127. coolly
  128. corollary
  129. correlate
  130. correspondence
  131. counselor
  132. courteous
  133. courtesy
  134. criticism
  135. criticize
  136. criticize
  137. decease
  138. deceive 
  139. defendant
  140. deferred
  141. definite
  142. definitely
  143. definition
  144. dependent
  145. deposit
  146. descend
  147. descent
  148. describe
  149. description
  150. desirable
  151. despair
  152. desperate
  153. develop
  154. development
  155. device
  156. dictionary
  157. difference
  158. dilemma
  159. dining
  160. disappear
  161. disappearance
  162. disappoint
  163. disastrous
  164. discipline
  165. disease
  166. dispensable
  167. dissatisfied
  168. does
  169. doesn’t
  170. dominant
  171. drunkenness
  172. during
  173. easily
  174. ecstasy
  175. effect
  176. efficiency
  177. eight
  178. eighth
  179. either
  180. eligible
  181. eliminate
  182. embarrass
  183. emperor
  184. encouragement
  185. encouraging
  186. enemy
  187. entirely
  188. environment
  189. equipped
  190. equivalent
  191. especially
  192. exaggerate
  193. exceed
  194. excellence
  195. excellent
  196. except
  197. exercise
  198. exhaust
  199. existence
  200. existent
  201. expect
  202. expense
  203. experience
  204. experiment
  205. explanation
  206. extremely
  207. exuberance
  208. facsimile
  209. fallacious
  210. fallacy
  211. familiar
  212. fascinate
  213. fascinating
  214. feasible
  215. February
  216. fictitious
  217. fiery
  218. finally
  219. financially
  220. fluorescent
  221. forcibly
  222. foreign
  223. foresee
  224. forfeit
  225. formerly
  226. forty
  227. forward
  228. fourth
  229. fuelling
  230. fulfill
  231. fundamentally
  232. gauge
  233. generally
  234. genius
  235. government
  236. governor
  237. grammar
  238. grateful
  239. grievous
  240. guarantee
  241. guardian
  242. guerrilla
  243. guidance
  244. handkerchief
  245. happily
  246. harass
  247. height
  248. heinous
  249. hemorrhage
  250. heroes
  251. hesitancy
  252. hindrance
  253. hoarse
  254. hoping
  255. humorous
  256. hygiene
  257. hypocrisy
  258. hypocrite
  259. ideally
  260. idiosyncrasy
  261. ignorance
  262. imaginary
  263. immediately
  264. implement
  265. incidentally
  266. incredible
  267. independence
  268. independent
  269. indicted
  270. indispensable
  271. inevitable
  272. influential
  273. information
  274. inoculate
  275. insurance
  276. intelligence
  277. intercede
  278. interference
  279. interrupt
  280. introduce
  281. irrelevant
  282. irresistible
  283. island
  284. jealous
  285. jealousy
  286. jewelry
  287. judgment
  288. judicial
  289. ketchup
  290. knowledge
  291. laboratory
  292. laid
  293. later
  294. latter
  295. legitimate
  296. leisure
  297. length
  298. lenient
  299. liaison
  300. library
  301. license
  302. lieutenant
  303. lightning
  304. likelihood
  305. likely
  306. loneliness
  307. longitude
  308. loose
  309. lose
  310. losing
  311. lovely
  312. luxury
  313. magazine
  314. maintain
  315. maintenance
  316. manageable
  317. maneuver
  318. manufacture
  319. marriage
  320. mathematics
  321. medicine
  322. mediocre
  323. millennium
  324. millionaire
  325. miniature
  326. minuscule
  327. minutes
  328. miscellaneous
  329. mischievous
  330. missile
  331. misspell
  332. misspelled
  333. mortgage
  334. mosquito
  335. mosquitoes
  336. murmur
  337. muscle
  338. mysterious
  339. narrative
  340. naturally
  341. necessary
  342. necessity
  343. neighbor
  344. neutron
  345. ninety
  346. ninth
  347. noticeable
  348. nowadays
  349. nuclear
  350. nuisance
  351. obedience
  352. obstacle
  353. occasion
  354. occasionally
  355. occurred
  356. occurrence
  357. odyssey
  358. official
  359. omission
  360. omit
  361. omitted
  362. opinion
  363. opponent
  364. opportunity
  365. oppression
  366. optimism
  367. optimistic
  368. orchestra
  369. ordinarily
  370. origin
  371. original
  372. outrageous
  373. overrun
  374. pamphlets
  375. panicky
  376. parallel
  377. parliament
  378. particular
  379. particularly
  380. pavilion
  381. peaceable
  382. peculiar
  383. penetrate
  384. perceive
  385. performance
  386. permanent
  387. permissible
  388. permitted
  389. perseverance
  390. persistence
  391. personal
  392. personnel
  393. perspiration
  394. physical
  395. physician
  396. picnicking
  397. piece
  398. pigeon
  399. pilgrimage
  400. pitiful
  401. planning
  402. playwright
  403. pleasant
  404. portray
  405. possess
  406. possession
  407. possessive
  408. possibility
  409. possible
  410. potato
  411. potatoes
  412. practically
  413. prairie
  414. precede
  415. precedence
  416. preceding
  417. preference
  418. preferred
  419. prejudice
  420. preparation
  421. prescription
  422. prevalent
  423. primitive
  424. principal
  425. principle
  426. privilege
  427. probably
  428. procedure
  429. proceed
  430. profession
  431. professor
  432. prominent
  433. pronounce
  434. pronunciation
  435. propaganda
  436. psychology
  437. publicly
  438. pumpkin
  439. pursue
  440. quandary
  441. quantity
  442. quarantine
  443. questionnaire
  444. quizzes
  445. raspberry
  446. realistically
  447. realize
  448. really
  449. recede
  450. receipt
  451. receive
  452. recognize
  453. recommend
  454. reference
  455. referred
  456. referring
  457. relevant
  458. relieving
  459. religious
  460. remembrance
  461. reminiscence
  462. renege
  463. repetition
  464. representative
  465. resemblance
  466. reservoir
  467. resistance
  468. restaurant
  469. rheumatism
  470. rhythm
  471. rhythmical
  472. ridiculous
  473. roommate
  474. sacrifice
  475. sacrilegious
  476. safety
  477. salary
  478. satellite
  479. scary
  480. scenery
  481. schedule
  482. science
  483. scissors
  484. secede
  485. secretary
  486. seize
  487. sense
  488. sentence
  489. separate
  490. separation
  491. sergeant
  492. several
  493. severely
  494. shepherd
  495. shining
  496. siege
  497. similar
  498. simile
  499. simply
  500. simultaneous
  501. sincerely
  502. skiing
  503. soliloquy
  504. sophomore
  505. souvenir
  506. special
  507. specifically
  508. specimen
  509. sponsor
  510. spontaneous
  511. statistics
  512. stopped
  513. strategy
  514. strength
  515. strenuous
  516. stubbornness
  517. studying
  518. subordinate
  519. subtle
  520. succeed
  521. success
  522. succession
  523. sufficient
  524. supersede
  525. suppress
  526. surprise
  527. surround
  528. susceptible
  529. suspicious
  530. syllable
  531. symmetrical
  532. synonymous
  533. tangible
  534. technical
  535. technique
  536. temperamental
  537. temperature
  538. tendency
  539. themselves
  540. theories
  541. therefore
  542. thorough
  543. though
  544. through
  545. till
  546. tomorrow
  547. tournament
  548. tourniquet
  549. towards
  550. tragedy
  551. transferred
  552. transferring
  553. tries
  554. truly
  555. twelfth
  556. tyranny
  557. unanimous
  558. undoubtedly
  559. unforgettable
  560. unique
  561. unnecessary
  562. until
  563. usable
  564. usage
  565. usually
  566. utilization
  567. vacuum
  568. valuable
  569. vengeance
  570. vigilant
  571. village
  572. villain
  573. violence
  574. virtue
  575. visible
  576. vision
  577. volume
  578. warrant
  579. warriors
  580. weather
  581. Wednesday
  582. weird
  583. wherever
  584. whether
  585. which
  586. wholly
  587. withdrawal
  588. worthwhile
  589. yacht
  590. yield
  591. young
  592. you’re
  593. zoology
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Is the CDC singular? and other questions

John Roach

Here are a list of frequently asked questions at Prowritingtips.com and, conveniently, their corresponding answers.

  1. Is CDC singular or plural?
  2. The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, or CDC, is singular. Don’t let the fact that many people work in many centers at the CDC throw you off: In American English, any group or organization is a singular noun, even if it the words themselves are plural.

    With any rule comes with an exception — sports teams are often referred to as plurals. Go figure.

  3. What is the rule for fixing misplaced modifiers?
  4. Misplaced modifiers are fixed by moving the modifier right next to the word being modified.

    Sitting on the couch, the TV is too far away to see.

    Either you need to see an optometrist or the TV isn’t actually sitting on the couch.

    Sitting on the couch, I can’t see the TV

    or better yet

    I can’t see the TV when I sit on the couch.

    Think of the modifier as the groom and the modifiee as the bride: you wouldn’t stick anyone between them, would you?

  5. How can you develop effective transitions in your writing?
  6. The best transitions are the ones that clearly state how two ideas are related.

    Transitions aren’t just syntactic sugar that makes your writing easier to read — they are logical constructs that inform the reader.  Is the idea in the new paragraph a consequence of the idea in the preceding one? Is it another entry is a series of ideas? Is it a continuation? Make the relationship between your paragraphs explicit and you’ll go a long way.

    But in addition to logical constructs, transitions are a way to keep the reader reading. Every blank line is an opportunity to put the book down, throw out the résumé, flip forward past the ad.  Tell the reader that these next few sentences are crucial to their well-being and  happiness.

    If that doesn’t work, lead off with a joke.

  7. Do I use a hyphen with “well”?
  8. Hyphens can be tricky. Luckily, there is a hard and fast rule: Use a hyphen before a noun, drop it afterwards.

    That is a well-read book.

    That man is well read.

    Again, it is a matter of understanding. Before the noun, the compound may be misunderstood as two equal adjectives. Afterwards, not so much.

  9. Does anyone actually use the en dash?
  10. No. But apparently some think it’s sexy.

If you have a writing or grammar question, please leave it in the comments.

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Basics of AP style

John Roach

Here is a brief overview of some of the guiding principles of AP style, which is widely used in journalism and public relations. It is not intended to be exhaustive: the stylebook is over 400 pages long and contains many exceptions. At the end of the article are links to sites with more information, but if you are involved with newspapers in any way, you should definitely pick up a copy of the AP stylebook and memorize it front to back.

Punctuation

The AP’s philosophy is that punctuation is meant to ease understanding: consequently, their style uses fewer punctuation marks that other styles might.

  • AP does not use the Oxford comma except in situations in which it would be unavoidable.
  • Hyphens are not used with prefixes unless
    1. The prefix ends with a vowel and the base word begins with the same vowel
    2. The base is a proper noun
    3. Omitting a prefix would double or triple a consonant in an ugly fashion (shelllike)
  • Use hyphens to join compound adjectives (pickled-fish seller.)
  • Don’t use a hyphen to join an adverb ending in -ly to an adjective (The widely read book.)
  • AP makes great use of the em dash.
  • AP omits the en dash.
  • When forming plurals
    • for a plural noun ending in “s,” add just an apostrophe.
    • For singular nouns ending in an “s,” add “’s” (Apostrophe + s).
    • For singular proper nouns ending in ’s’, add just an apostrophe.

Abbreviations and Acronyms

  • As much as possible, avoid acronyms.
  • Even if the acronym is well understood, such as FBI, you may need to spell it out the first time it appears
  • Don’t give the acronym immediately after the first reference. Wait until the second time it is used.
  • Generally, omit periods in acronyms, unless the acronym would spell an unintended word.
  • Use periods in most two-letter acronyms.
  • If the acronym is longer than six letters, only capitalize the first letter.
  • Generally speaking, use abbreviations before someone’s name, and spell them out after.
  • B.C., A.D., a.m., p.m., and No. cannot be used as abbreviations without a numeral.
  • States do not use postal abbreviations — AP has their own set of abbreviations for them. In fact, eight states aren’t abbreviated at all.
  • St., Ave, and Blvd are abbreviated when used with a numbered address.

Numbers

  • Spell out numbers nine and below, except in ages and dimensions.
  • Don’t begin a sentence with a numeral. You can spell it out, though.
  • Don’t use full numbers above six digits, unless the exact number is central to the point. (Ex. 10,000, $10M)

Of course, there is much more to know to be fully proficient in AP style. To learn more, consult the links below and read the stylebook. If you think you’re already well versed in the style, take some AP tests at Newsroom101.com

For more information

  • Associated Press (AP) Style Guide - the basics
  • AP Style Basics | Whatcom.ctc.edu
  • AP Style Overview | Mnstate.edu
  • ASSOCIATED PRESS STYLE ESSENTIALS | Wwu.edu
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